Recount writing

TANIWHA CUP

WALT:  understand the correct structure for a recount.

Success criteria: My Structure will include a ...

- Title

- Orientation (who, what,  where.)

- A series of events in chronological order or sequence.

- A final evaluative comment.

In the holidays for the first week hokianga held the taniwha cup It was held at kaikohe
rugby fields. On sunday we went to go stay out In waima the marae was called
tuhirangi marae we stayed there for two days until it was monday. On monday we
went to kaikohe to get our team photos and then after taking photos with our team
we had some food then we went back to the marae and played games for hours.

Then the next day we went to the kaikohe fields for our first game first you had to way
In every day  you had to way under 57 kilos lucky. Most of our team was under If u
weighed over you were out for the game. Our first game was against the whangarei
bears everyone knows the whangarei teams are hard. We lost 10 to 21 then we
went back to the tuhirangi marae then we went into to the waima school pool to relax
but It was freezing then we just played around all day then when It was around six
a clock we had dinner and played spot light nearly every night then we went to bed
at tennis.

Then It was wednesday then we went back In to kaikohe for another game we had to
weigh  In again we were all under our whole team was under the weight limit. So we
went out to warm up we were versing mangonui after a half hour of warming up we
went to go verse mangonui they done a haka then we done a haka. After that we started
our game we got  thrashed but long after that they got a trie It was a trie after a trie
when the game finished we went back to tuhirangi marae. And repeated everything
over again then the next day we versed the bay of islands they were the champions
for three years. But we came closest to beating them they wear the hardest team we lost
but we done really good. We got two tries final score it was 10 to 51 after that we had
a feed and went back to the marae It was fun everyone celebrated even though we lost.
But we still had another two games so we still had to go to bed early.

Then came the morning I was so excited to verse the presidents because jonas sonny
and tyla rain was in the presidents I couldn't wait when we got to kaikohe. I quickly
weighed In and got changed then warmed up and then we on the field we played
hard but unfortunately we won.